proposal for technologies used in evaluation

This is my proposal for the type of technolgies i will be using, helping me to plan my evaluation effectively. To make it better i planned it on a technolgy because it makes it more professional and effective. To improve this next time i would add more detail about why i will use this particular technolgy for each question.

original drafting of answers for evaluation

This is the original draft for answer for my evaluation where i have written and analysed every detail of my magazine and the reason for each technique used.I was able to write this evaluation from the previous evaluation i done for my college magazine. To improve this next time i would use more images and do a mind map of a typical reader that would read my velvet magazine, adding fb links etc to the magazine.

Task 10: Audience feedback

This is my audience feedback task where I commented on three members in my class's music magazine pointing out weaknesses and strengths I print screened their work to show what I am talking about, I print screened my comment for evidence that I had commented and iv'e noted some extra comments that they could consider doing or improving.

Final front cover

This is my final front page after  my audience feedback I have developed this further in detail. And changed the fonts so they're all the same i have changed the masthead becuase it didn't look serious before and the rest of my features was serious.

Final contents page

This is my final contents page. I have added three images to back up my features and regulars and to also promote these pages. My contents page includes an editors note also to give the audience a personal viw from the editor about the role of editing this magazine/  issue.

Final dps spread

This is my final piece of my double page spread i have changed the group feature into a feature with a solo artist because i believe it is more effective and can be portrayed better. I have used the same fonts as the front cover and contents page.  To make the style consistent and relatable.

contents page re draft

I have re drafted my contents page again to introduce 'selena' on my contents page. Directing the audience to my dps

new front cover

This is my front cover i have changed the front cover because i have change dmy group singers into one singer. Because she represents rock more than the other models i had previously.

Final contents page

This is my finished contents page. I have put it in the middle of the page to make it different from other music magazines even rock magazines. I have used my other images of my other models also in another angle. To improve this next time I would use more images and maybe do a double page of contents.

third draft of contents page

This is my finished contents page I am not sure if I will pursue this as my final piece just yet, as I might change this around slightly if so they would be shown on blogger. To improve this I think id need to change the position of the image on the left. or position everything in the middle of the page to make it more unique and different.

contents page second draft

This is the start of my music magazine, I have changed the pictures around and the style of "Contents". This is a better improved version of the first draft, to improve this next time I would need to complete it completely.

contents page first draft

This is the first draft of my contents page, it is not permanent and is not finished. To develop this more I would increase the main image size, and change the main image picture as it is pixelated and not relevant to the main cover star on the front cover.