This is my final front page after my audience feedback I have developed this further in detail. And changed the fonts so they're all the same i have changed the masthead becuase it didn't look serious before and the rest of my features was serious.
The font, colour and size of the masthead is good but you should have put her head in front of the text. Also I like that it doesn't have too many cover lines, it's simple but eye catching at the same.
Very nice magazine; your magazine has a clear 'elegant' feel to it. The colour scheme you have used really contrast with each other well. You have all the conventions needed for a magazine.
As an improvement, I think you could improve the quality of the contents page; for example the white blocks look like they are just there... and the ones especially separating Regulars and Editors Notes look like they're a different size.
your front page is excellent , the fonts used are world class including the layout however what is lacking in the front page is creativity but it is still eye catching
I like the overall composition of the front cover. It looks professional and good enough to sell. I'm not too keen on the cover lines, they need to entice the reader a little bit more if you want them to buy it. Other than that its all good bro.
the front cover is structured very well. Such an amazing magazine, i love how you played with the text sizes for your pull out, it is very noticeable because of the size of the text. THe colour scheme is really good and relates with the cover star. The only thing I think that needs changing is the text sizes at the right side of the front cover.
The font, colour and size of the masthead is good but you should have put her head in front of the text. Also I like that it doesn't have too many cover lines, it's simple but eye catching at the same.
ReplyDeleteVery nice magazine; your magazine has a clear 'elegant' feel to it. The colour scheme you have used really contrast with each other well. You have all the conventions needed for a magazine.
ReplyDeleteAs an improvement, I think you could improve the quality of the contents page; for example the white blocks look like they are just there... and the ones especially separating Regulars and Editors Notes look like they're a different size.
your front page is excellent , the fonts used are world class including the layout however what is lacking in the front page is creativity but it is still eye catching
ReplyDeleteI like the overall composition of the front cover. It looks professional and good enough to sell. I'm not too keen on the cover lines, they need to entice the reader a little bit more if you want them to buy it. Other than that its all good bro.
ReplyDeleteThe front cover is really good, I like your choice of colours and the black background really suits the main image.
ReplyDeletethe front cover is structured very well. Such an amazing magazine, i love how you played with the text sizes for your pull out, it is very noticeable because of the size of the text. THe colour scheme is really good and relates with the cover star. The only thing I think that needs changing is the text sizes at the right side of the front cover.
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