Evaluation Q6- pow toon

i used pow toon to add images and for my information to come up seperatley like a presentation. to improve this next time i would use more images and use more slides. What went well was the input of text and images being easy to do without it destroying the whole presentation. What didn't go so well was the timing of each slide.

Evaluation 4&5 - powerpoint/slideshare

This is my evaluation for Q4 and 5 the struggles i had was sing new software and technolgies like slideshare, what went well was that slideshare was easy to use for beginners as well as powerpoint. to improve this next time i would use more images and do more questions on this software.

Evaluation - Q3- Pow Toon

This is question 3 that i made on a new technology pow Toon to get a different effect and feel from the others as Pow Toon is more comical and fun. The problems i had was that it took long for me to adapt to this new technology again. The things i most enjoyed about this technology was that it was fun to use and fitted everything i wanted on it including pictures.

Evaluation Q1 cont, 2 and 7

This is question 1, 2 and 7 that i evaluated on prezi because it is a great technology and it is professional. The things that i found hard on this website was the slides as using the templates were hard as they gave either too many slides or too little. The things that went fine was the putting text and images in my slides effectively.

evaluation question 1 part 2 prezi

This is my evaluation For question again as they didn't have enough slides on the template i had to do two prezi's which was a downfall as it was hard to relate to the first part of the question.What went well was again the fact it was easy to use and make it your own. To improve this next time i would put all of question 1 in one prezi than in seperate prezi's.

Evaluation question1, part 1: prezi

This is the first part to question one that i have made on prezi,i have made it so it is clear, easy to read and follow. The important conventions i used are highlighted because to show its importance and that i've used conventions to improve this next time i would ad images to show the conventions that i have used.

proposal for technologies used in evaluation

This is my proposal for the type of technolgies i will be using, helping me to plan my evaluation effectively. To make it better i planned it on a technolgy because it makes it more professional and effective. To improve this next time i would add more detail about why i will use this particular technolgy for each question.

original drafting of answers for evaluation

This is the original draft for answer for my evaluation where i have written and analysed every detail of my magazine and the reason for each technique used.I was able to write this evaluation from the previous evaluation i done for my college magazine. To improve this next time i would use more images and do a mind map of a typical reader that would read my velvet magazine, adding fb links etc to the magazine.

Task 10: Audience feedback

This is my audience feedback task where I commented on three members in my class's music magazine pointing out weaknesses and strengths I print screened their work to show what I am talking about, I print screened my comment for evidence that I had commented and iv'e noted some extra comments that they could consider doing or improving.

Final front cover

This is my final front page after  my audience feedback I have developed this further in detail. And changed the fonts so they're all the same i have changed the masthead becuase it didn't look serious before and the rest of my features was serious.

Final contents page

This is my final contents page. I have added three images to back up my features and regulars and to also promote these pages. My contents page includes an editors note also to give the audience a personal viw from the editor about the role of editing this magazine/  issue.

Final dps spread

This is my final piece of my double page spread i have changed the group feature into a feature with a solo artist because i believe it is more effective and can be portrayed better. I have used the same fonts as the front cover and contents page.  To make the style consistent and relatable.

contents page re draft

I have re drafted my contents page again to introduce 'selena' on my contents page. Directing the audience to my dps

new front cover

This is my front cover i have changed the front cover because i have change dmy group singers into one singer. Because she represents rock more than the other models i had previously.

Final contents page

This is my finished contents page. I have put it in the middle of the page to make it different from other music magazines even rock magazines. I have used my other images of my other models also in another angle. To improve this next time I would use more images and maybe do a double page of contents.

third draft of contents page

This is my finished contents page I am not sure if I will pursue this as my final piece just yet, as I might change this around slightly if so they would be shown on blogger. To improve this I think id need to change the position of the image on the left. or position everything in the middle of the page to make it more unique and different.

contents page second draft

This is the start of my music magazine, I have changed the pictures around and the style of "Contents". This is a better improved version of the first draft, to improve this next time I would need to complete it completely.

contents page first draft

This is the first draft of my contents page, it is not permanent and is not finished. To develop this more I would increase the main image size, and change the main image picture as it is pixelated and not relevant to the main cover star on the front cover.

front cover of music rock magazine

This is my front cover for my rock music magazine. I have used a basic masthead with an edge to it so its simple and the main image of the cover star stands out better/more. The colour of my models wardrobe is the same colour I have tried to make my masthead and strapline.
I have used white cover lines as they stand out on the black background. my pull quote is associated with what the journalism on the dps is about. using their band name small and next to the quote to portray who they are. My image is also wearing something similar to velvet which is a rock aspect as most people would velvet to be worn by rock fanatics or singers. I have used the lead singer in my front cover instead of the whole group because in my case studies of kerrang they did the same thing with paramour and it was very effective as it leaves the reader thinking why.  To improve this next time I would use a better image and make my masthead more complex.

Contact sheet

These are the strong images I took that i would consider to use on my music magazine. I would use these images because they relate to rock and are angled effectively. I have group images of the band and single images of every band member that i would expect to use on my contents page. To improve this next time i would make the wardrobe better and the shots using more portrait shots.

I used the images of the girl in velvet because she gave the magazine a more professional look as shes wearing velvet it contrasts with the theme of the magazine. I used the other images in the contents page as additional singers. As i developed them from being a group band to a solo artist as those pictures struck out to me more than the others. To improve this next time i would change the clothing of the other models and take pictures of them from a low angle to make them look superior and mighty.